Loom Use Case: Give Feedback on Landing Pages
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Hi, I'm Sam from the loon team. And I'm going to show you how to use async video to provide feedback on landing page designs.
Here's an example that I filmed for my colleague Judson to provide feedback on a landing page project. We were working on.
Take a look. Hey Judson. Thank you again for mocking up that page on sanity. I completely understand where you're coming from.
Julia and I took some time to cut the text and also change up the structure, which will hopefully make it clear for customers.
Let me walk you through a couple of things that we've changed. So you'll notice a lot of the text I've taught here has been cut.
The next thing I'll point out is we've separated the instructions to make it a bit easier visually and also so that it's just easier for people to understand how to redeem.
So the first thing customers need to do is they have to either set up a free account with us, or they need to sign into their existing free account.
So you'll see that we have the first instruction here, linking out to the sign in or sign up page depending on what type of customer they are, the next step.
They need to go to their workspace settings and apply a code there. This code particularly we're looking at changing it to slack 30 TBD on that.
We'll have a second CTA, which links directly into the workspace settings page. And then I'm going to film a loom tomorrow, which we can insert here, walking through how to insert the code for customers that might be having some more challenges.
The actual look of this section. We'd like to follow the education landing page. If possible, if that's not possible in sanity, I give you a hundred percent creative license to mock it up as you see best fit.
The next thing I'll point out is our legal content section. Into a tool tip. Like you see here from the example on our pricing page, that should clear up any issue that we have in terms of spacing.
So TB on that as well.
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Hi, I'm Sam from the loon team. And I'm going to show you how to use async video to provide feedback on landing page designs.
Here's an example that I filmed for my colleague Judson to provide feedback on a landing page project. We were working on.
Take a look. Hey Judson. Thank you again for mocking up that page on sanity. I completely understand where you're coming from.
Julia and I took some time to cut the text and also change up the structure, which will hopefully make it clear for customers.
Let me walk you through a couple of things that we've changed. So you'll notice a lot of the text I've taught here has been cut.
The next thing I'll point out is we've separated the instructions to make it a bit easier visually and also so that it's just easier for people to understand how to redeem.
So the first thing customers need to do is they have to either set up a free account with us, or they need to sign into their existing free account.
So you'll see that we have the first instruction here, linking out to the sign in or sign up page depending on what type of customer they are, the next step.
They need to go to their workspace settings and apply a code there. This code particularly we're looking at changing it to slack 30 TBD on that.
We'll have a second CTA, which links directly into the workspace settings page. And then I'm going to film a loom tomorrow, which we can insert here, walking through how to insert the code for customers that might be having some more challenges.
The actual look of this section. We'd like to follow the education landing page. If possible, if that's not possible in sanity, I give you a hundred percent creative license to mock it up as you see best fit.
The next thing I'll point out is our legal content section. Into a tool tip. Like you see here from the example on our pricing page, that should clear up any issue that we have in terms of spacing.
So TB on that as well.