video1.0<iframe src="https://www.loom.com/embed/207a8c3dd0e846cda1ba5a13a2c1328c" frameborder="0" width="1920" height="1440" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe>14401920Loomhttps://www.loom.com14401920https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/207a8c3dd0e846cda1ba5a13a2c1328c-191d18d1122e0443.gif88.231In this Loom, I show a screenwriting tool that works like a mentor, it critiques your draft and helps you think better without writing the story for you. I paste a short excerpt from a student screenplay called Unplaced by a Duke student into the editor and then analyze what happens. The goal is to see what the instructor says about the draft and how the feedback comes across. There is no specific action requested of viewers in this clip.