video1.0<iframe src="https://www.loom.com/embed/7463f544edbf49deb50b5069e31a7124" frameborder="0" width="960" height="720" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe>720960Loomhttps://www.loom.com720960https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/7463f544edbf49deb50b5069e31a7124-00001.jpg141p: The writer is considering revising the underlined portion to the following. intentions: to them, it seemed that Elgin was stealing rather than protecting an important part of Greek culture. Should the writer make this revision here?