<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><oembed><type>video</type><version>1.0</version><html>&lt;iframe src=&quot;https://www.loom.com/embed/89c54d8988cd4295bcce9374b43cd1ef&quot; frameborder=&quot;0&quot; width=&quot;1920&quot; height=&quot;1440&quot; webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen&gt;&lt;/iframe&gt;</html><height>1440</height><width>1920</width><provider_name>Loom</provider_name><provider_url>https://www.loom.com</provider_url><thumbnail_height>1440</thumbnail_height><thumbnail_width>1920</thumbnail_width><thumbnail_url>https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/89c54d8988cd4295bcce9374b43cd1ef-7094ec878665a7d2.gif</thumbnail_url><duration>3539.094</duration><title>Bar Exam Essay Scoring Breakdown and Fixes 🙂</title><description>I reviewed bar exam essay responses and showed how to maximize points using clear writing structure like element plus brief analysis plus fact, and when to include at least one real counterargument with however. I walked through examples where strong substantive law still scored 50 to 55 because students wrote too much, lumped parties or issues, skipped counterarguments, or missed organized IRAC. One good 65 example used the same element in the counterargument, like mediation before arbitration. I also suggested simulate testing conditions, outline, and briefly address minor issues. I did not request specific actions, but viewers were invited to ask questions.</description></oembed>