<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><oembed><type>video</type><version>1.0</version><html>&lt;iframe src=&quot;https://www.loom.com/embed/95e0c788ab1b4566ac3f73a1b396a71b&quot; frameborder=&quot;0&quot; width=&quot;1920&quot; height=&quot;1440&quot; webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen&gt;&lt;/iframe&gt;</html><height>1440</height><width>1920</width><provider_name>Loom</provider_name><provider_url>https://www.loom.com</provider_url><thumbnail_height>1440</thumbnail_height><thumbnail_width>1920</thumbnail_width><thumbnail_url>https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/95e0c788ab1b4566ac3f73a1b396a71b-00001.gif</thumbnail_url><duration>241.862</duration><title>Evaluating and Revising Thesis Statements</title><description>In this video, I discuss the importance of having a debatable thesis statement and provide examples of both debatable and non-debatable statements. I also explain the significance of having a narrow thesis and how it strengthens your argument. Additionally, I explore different types of claims that can be used in thesis statements, such as claims about value, solutions or policies, facts or definitions, and cause and effect. Watch the video to gain a better understanding of how to evaluate and revise your thesis statements effectively.</description></oembed>