video1.0<iframe src="https://www.loom.com/embed/a7cfafbeaaaf40a2b40f89f0b3c60c37" frameborder="0" width="1556" height="1167" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe>11671556Loomhttps://www.loom.com11671556https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/a7cfafbeaaaf40a2b40f89f0b3c60c37-76179ed188e78c25.gif507.63In this video, I provide feedback on the Salesy newsletter draft, suggesting improvements to make it more engaging and focused on selling. I highlight the need for a clear subject line, voice, and alignment with the target audience of coaches and consultants. Action requested: Reflect on making the content more sales-oriented and specific to avoid being too general.