video1.0<iframe src="https://www.loom.com/embed/bd17945e822d4b5cb90db950756332de" frameborder="0" width="1366" height="1024" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe>10241366Loomhttps://www.loom.com10241366https://cdn.loom.com/sessions/thumbnails/bd17945e822d4b5cb90db950756332de-00001.gif48.879999999999995In this video, I walk you through an example of a developmental edit. I showcase a manuscript called "The Deep End Story" and highlight various examples of content. Throughout the edit, I leave comments in the text and provide a detailed report for the writer. Pay close attention to the changes I make and the feedback I provide.